Nysta Character Study #1: The Bladesmaster
This is an early Character Study of Nysta. One of the first things I wrote about her, actually. It might have made it into the first draft of the books, but I ended up leaving it as it was and not looking back. At this stage, Nysta had a sword. She no longer has the sword as I felt she was getting a bit TOO good with weapons and wanted her to have her weaknesses, too.
Also, she had a knife called A Gate to Hell. This was an homage to Lucio Fulci, of course. I have renamed the knife to Queen of Hearts in the series, but paid homage to Lucio with the dagger called Fulci's Last Joke. Which always hits an eye...
I'm putting this up more for your amusement than anything, as you can see how far Nysta progressed as a character from this simple snapshot of life in the imperial city of Doom's Reach...
Nysta Character Study #1: The Bladesmaster
"Tell
me, Nysta," the Mage leaned back in his armchair and tugged on
his beard thoughtfully. "Tell me. Have you ever faced a
Bladesmaster?"
"Not
yet."
"Do
you think you'd have any problems with one?"
"That
depends."
"On...?"
"On
whether or not his major organs are where they should be."
**
Nysta
lay on the roof, glaring down at the guard standing at his post
across the courtyard.
He knew
she was next to invisible, shaded as she was by both the moonless
night and the tree which cast its shadow across this corner of the
roof. She remained still, and had done so for about an hour already.
She would wait until she felt totally certain it was the right time.
She was
dressed in enchanted leather, the breeches and shirt made of patches
of dark green and black leather held together with leather straps.
She wore a thin chainmail vest under the leather, and this night wore
a hood to keep her skin from shining - a hazard she often faced with
her too-pale complexion.
Across
her body a myriad of sheaths, pouches, and pockets concealed more
weapons, and though some were empty, most were not. Her favourite
daggers, A Flaw in the Glass and The Gate to Hell were
snug against her inner forearms and she also carried a shortsword
called Kingfisher
strapped to her back.
Nysta was slim, even for an elf, and seemed far too delicate to be
taken seriously in combat situations. Many, however, had
underestimated her enhancements and fewer had lived to regret it.
Her face was either beautiful or unattractive depending on how one
who saw her viewed those of a genetically engineered race. Her face
was narrow, with sharp cheeks which gave her a near-devillish face in
certain situations. This, combined with a wicked scar which jagged
out from just under her eye to almost kiss the slender ear which
jutted out from her face like a slender dagger, made hers a face many
remembered. Her violet eyes stared at everything around her, and the
way she scanned the world around her at all times often caused those
around her to feel even more nervous.
The black hair framing her face, hidden beneath the hood, was tied
with a black leather thong. At the ends of the thong hung a small
metal bell with the clapper removed. Some thought this an odd
feminine touch to the elf's more functional clothing, but those who
had witnessed its use might argue otherwise.
She shifted, slowly, allowing the blood to flood areas which might
have gone numb had she stayed perfectly still on the cold roof.
The guard opposite still had not moved.
He, too, shifted. From one leg to another.
He looked sideways, coughed.
Rolled his shoulders and resumed his vigil.
Had she not the patience of one who had done this many times before,
she would have sighed.
Despite the patience, however, she did grunt softly to herself.
"Fuck."
**
The elf waited.
A light in the house went dark and the guard craned his neck to make
certain everything was as it should be. Satisfied, he looked around
once more at the deserted courtyard and scratched his nose.
Nysta
waited until he angled his head slightly away from her, and pulled
herself up to a half-crouch. The high roof behind her hid her
silhouette
from his view. She slipped Go With My Blessing
from a sheath on her thigh and drew back.
His head turned toward her just as the dagger left her fingertips.
It was an insect of light, shooting through the starry night and
burying itself deep into the guard's throat.
He dropped with only a minimum of clatter - something she was
thankful for.
It was a stupid thing to have done. By rights she should have either
waited, or tried moving around the outside of the roof. Dropped down
on him and taken him out more quietly.
But, quite frankly, she'd just had enough of all the waiting shit.
She rolled off the roof and landed without sound on the edge of the
walkway beneath, inwardly thanking the old man who'd made the
custom-designed soft-sole boots she now wore.
Her head flicked back and forth, taking in the courtyard and all
major routes in and out.
Nothing moved.
Satisfied that the shadows were merely shadows, she crept along the
walkway toward the eastern door.
That's about when the yelling started.
**
The western and northern doors burst open and swordsmen burst into
the courtyard with a loud roar.
Startled, Nysta bounded back into the shadows, heading for the only
escape route instantly available - the eastern wall.
She found it already blocked by five burly guardsmen with swords and
large grins but otherwise not much else where it counted.
She
leapt at them, drawing Eat This
and Entrance Exam.
With her left hand she slashed at the closest guard, cutting his
upper arm open with Entrance Exam's
broad short blade, and with her right she stabbed in under the second
guard's standard attack, pushing the blade deep into his belly before
ripping it out as she spun into the third guard's defensive pose.
Both blades took him in the eyes, digging deep into his brain.
She jerked them out and turned to the remaining two, paying no
attention yet to the booted approach of more guards behind.
The
fourth roared, brought his sword up high and slashed down with
determination and force. The blade slid past her shoulder uselessly
and she flicked her wrist, sending Eat This
into his chest. The first guard had recovered, though he clutched his
upper arm desperately. He lunged with his wounded arm clutching the
sword, eager to catch her from behind. But her enhancements kicked
her body out of the way, the blade leaving only a shallow scratch
across her side. The wound would heal, she thought, leaving another
scar. It would have plenty of company.
She curled her lip into a crooked grin and bounded out of the fifth
guard's well-trained attack. The back-strike of his blade caught her
on the forearm, but the enchanted leather ribs which ran the length
of her forearms deflected it easily. She dodged another attack by the
first guard, already feeling the approach of more guards.
Irritated,
she threw Entrance Exam
into the face of the fifth guard, and drew Kingfisher
from across her back. The thin blade was shorter than most swords and
almost as deceptively fragile as the assassin wielding it. She held
it upside down in a backhand style which allowed for slashing and
cutting more than the thursting style of the guards who approached
with cautious glances at the four bodies and the fifth guard lurching
almost drunkenly from blood loss, his sword hanging limp in his
hands.
She crouched low, like a cat, both hands gripping the sword's hilt.
She looked down at their feet, refusing to meet their eyes.
They noticed. It made them more cautious.
She watched them, not with her eyes, but with her entire being,
allowing her enhancements to feel the world unlimited by her usual
stubborn desire to keep control over them.
One
stepped forward, his front foot taking a tentative sword-fighter's
step forward. He was a second from rushing in, his sword making a
standard attacking strike for there are no other strikes for someone
trained in this manner.
She looked up at him, her eyes glittering. "Come on, then,"
she said. "Help me meet my quota."
He lunged.
She dodged easily, rolled and swept the sword across his thigh,
cutting his balance from beneath. He cried out and dropped his sword
as pain arced through his body. Already she had turned away and
darted at the remaining swordsmen.
The bulk of them fled backward a few steps, the rest died as she
swept through them, her sword flashing like a kingfisher over a pond.
She didn't cut them more than once. She went for their thighs, their
guts, or their arms. Easy targets, but they bled a lot. And fast.
She took another cut across her back, her opponent's blade shearing
through the chainmail and cutting a respectable gash across her ribs.
It hurt like hell.
The elf knelt in the courtyard, her sword pointing toward the earth.
Blood trickled down her fingers, down the hilt. She frowned. She
hadn't noticed the cut across her forearm.
Her enhancements slowly knitted the flesh together, but they couldn't
repair too much damage at a time. She brought one hand off the sword,
aware the waiting swordsmen were muttering to themselves, surrounding
her. She pushed the hood from her face and heard one of them gasp.
She
smiled her crooked smile and the swordsman in front of her lifted his
sword, angled it into attack position and lunged with a cry. She took
the blade against her own and felt the presence of another too close.
The other's sword slashed close to her leg and she swept Kingfisher
free, swiping the swordsman across his exposed throat with a speed he
would have had nightmares about had he lived through the experience.
She
dodged another attack and savagely struck out with her foot to catch
another swordsman in the chest as his blade glanced off the hardened
armour on her shoulder. The blade missed her throat by only a lover's
breath. With no time to consider her luck, she lunged forward, taking
the swordsman in the chest. With no time to consider her luck, she
lunged forward, taking the swordsman in the chest. Kingfisher
slid through his body and erupted out through his back with a
fountain of blood. He cried out, a name of a lover perhaps, and
dropped, taking Kingfisher
with him.
Without
thought, she drew A Flaw in the Glass
and rounded to meet the next swordsman who held his sword high and
prepared to chop down and cleave her in tow - provided she remained
where she was.
"Stop!"
The swordsman lowered his sword, slowly, never taking his eyes from
the elf.
She
smirked at him and reversed her grip on A Flaw in the
Glass, and turned toward the
speaker.
He wore simple clothing and carried a shortsword in one hand and a
dagger in the other. The dagger was a wicked looking thing, slightly
curved and possibly enchanted by the purple glow it spun out into the
night. She eyed it with a mix of wariness and excitement.
"Love the knife," she said.
He raised his eyebrow and held it up to her. "What? This?"
She nodded. "What's it enchanted for?"
"You'll find out."
Nysta licked her lips and smiled. "I hope so. I have a spare
sheath for it on my hip."
The Bladesmaster cocked his head to one side and stepped down into
the courtyard.
He glanced at the bodies around him and tried not to show too much
surprise. "A bit crude, perhaps, but not a bad effort."
She shrugged. "Whatever works."
**
"He
has trained for fifteen years with the monks of Teijin-Po," the
Mage said. "He spent time with the tribes in Alkardy, learning
their martial arts. Unarmed, he fights like a demon. He has never
lost a fencing match, and is reputed to be enhanced with some of the
most sophisticated enhancements ever seen. Possibly they're better
than yours. We can't know for sure. We do know he's killed somewhere
close to thirty challengers to his home."
"You
want me to kill him?"
The
Mage shrugged. "You don't have to. Who we're really after is the
one he's protecting - the merchant, Cados Bey. Cados has been dodging
his taxes, Nysta. Very naughty. That in itself isn't necessarily a
bad thing, but he's been chatting about it to his friends and we just
can't have any old merchant thinking he can swindle the Imperial
Treasury, can we?"
She
shrugged.
"In
any case, I would advise not fighting him at all, Nysta. However,
should it come to that, I can only wish you luck and promise to have
you buried somewhere nice. That's if he's prepared to leave any bits
of you to bury."
**
"You know when I'm through with you, there won't really be
anything left to bury?" he stepped across one of the bodies and
stated this with the confidence of one who had faced the best
fighters in the world and beat them all.
She
shrugged, keeping A Flaw in the Glass
aimed low, still held backwards in her hand - a defensive posture.
"Not one for talking, are you?"
She curled her lips, the side closest to the scar curling even more
than the other.
He turned, only slightly, bending his knees and crouching in the
classic knife-fighter's pose.
She
imitated his crouch, keeping her body low to the ground and A
Flaw in the Glass tight in her
grip.
They circled like sharks, testing the water with subtle muscle
twitches and feints.
The Bladesmaster's eyes relaxed the more they circled, taking in her
every response to his movements.
He was, she surmised by the way his muscles flowed, enhanced for
smoothness. For a fluidity of movement she found vaguely disturbing.
He seemed to glide more than move.
It was awful to watch. His body was alien, disconnected from reality.
Unearthly.
Surreal.
She touched her upper lip with the tip of her tongue, wondering where
he'd gotten those and how she could get a set.
The Bladesmaster watched the elf as she responded to his
enhancements.
She was absorbed by his motion, and he kept gliding to lull her even
further. He felt his speed enhancements kick in and prepared for his
lunge. He would take out her stomach with his shortsword, before
sliding right past her and burying the dagger in the back of her
neck.
It was a favourite move, finished with a flourish.
Her eyes gazed at him.
He knew she was falling for it.
Caught in the spell.
Her tongue flicked out and touched her top lip.
He grinned.
And lunged.
Nysta
rolled with the strike, feeling the blade scrape across the armour
protecting her side. The chainmail pressed against her skin as the
shortsword floated past. She twisted with the strike, bringing A
Flaw in the Glass up fast to
block the dagger thrust which would have taken out her neck if she'd
fallen for the pitiful trick in the first place.
In
allowing the first strike to go unblocked, she was able to use her
free hand to pull Cat's Claw
which scratched the back of his sword arm.
The Bladesmaster yelped and dropped the sword, jerking away from her
second swipe.
Blood dripped as he bounded away from her, his dagger slashing
defensively at the air between them.
She smirked, remaining where she was in the classic knife-fighter's
crouch.
He scowled at her.
"Nasty," he said. "That's cheating, you know."
"How is it cheating?"
"You drew another dagger!"
"Did I? Well, you had two. I merely evened up the fight."
He chewed his bottom lip and crouched again, ignoring the blood
flowing freely down his arm. "Well. Now it seems I don't have
time to play with you."
He lunged again, this time using every ounce of speed his
enhancements would give him.
His first cut bit into her shoulder.
The second swiped across her belly.
Only the chainmail stopped him from opening her up. He grunted at
this, and his third strike was point forward, determined to stab deep
into her guts. He was already thinking of ripping upward. His rage at
being cut by someone who didn't even possess a black sash in
Teijin-Ga-Do fuelling him to pull harder at the enhancements which
kicked through his body.
A
Flaw in the Glass took the
thrust and deflected it. She dodged to the side avoiding the next
lightning-fast strike and kicked at his shins as she leapt sideways,
dropping Cat's Claw
and unsheathing The Gate to Hell.
The Bladesmaster noticed this switching of weapons with a curse.
"Fucking honorless dog!" he spat, driving forward with a
frenzy of sharp attacks that kept her stepping backward.
There was a rhythm to his work. A chop, a slash, a swipe. Hard wrists
and technical moves.
She curled her lips as she worked hard at her defensive strikes,
retreating further and further across the courtyard. Her eyes flicked
this way and that. She noticed the guards, gathered behind him,
swords still drawn.
He
swept up under her guard and the dagger slid past her face. She could
smell its enchantment. If it struck, she knew she would be dead
immediately. Its poison wasn't as aggressive as A Flaw in
the Glass, but given a decent
strike it would kill just as quickly.
She
twisted her body, feinted with The Gate to Hell,
and aimed another kick - this time striking his shin.
He dropped with a startled cry, his dagger thudding into the ground.
"Careful," she hissed. "Don't break my knife."
His head jerked up and for the first time Nysta saw something in his
eyes she had no doubt he was absolutely not used to having there.
Fear.
She glanced swiftly over her shoulder, saw the door was close.
Grinned at him.
Saluted.
And
threw A Flaw in the Glass
at his head. It took him in the cheek. She kicked him again, this
time catching his wrist as he attempted a defensive gesture. He
dropped the dagger and she plunged The Gate to Hell
deep into his sternum where it chewed through his heart with such
delight that the blade actually howled in pleasure.
The
Bladesmaster's eyes widened in agony as the icy cold vacuum of The
Gate to Hell filled his body and
numbed his mind. "It can't be," he whimpered. "I'm the
best. I can't lose!"
She
crouched in front of him, tore the dagger from his chest, and curled
her lips upward into her phantom grin. "Lose? Who said this was
a game?"
And then she dashed through the eastern door before the guards could
move.
The merchant was in his room, gibbering something as she bounded in.
She
threw Dance at Midnight
through his left eye, and kept running.
Jumped. Shoulder first.
**
Outside the grounds of the Bey Residence, a lone street guard
fingered his pike.
Rockam Bint hated night shifts.
Anything could happen. Madmen, haunted by terrors, stalked the
streets with their wild eyed lunacy and street thugs sometimes
thought they could do as they wished.
Stray dogs sometimes got a little too territorial.
Rats eyed him from the alleys and he shuddered, knowing they were
thinking he was little more than a walking meal.
He
heard the explosion of wood and glass and saw the shadowed figure
burst onto the street and begin running toward him, pursued by two of
the merchant's guards.
He was about to push his pike forward, stop her, when he noticed the
pale skin, the curling grin. The pink scar on the cheek. The violet
eyes.
The dagger in her fist, prepared to punch through his face and into
his brain.
In brains, Rockam Bint wasn't the quickest guard on the force, but he
wasn't exactly the slowest, either.
He jumped to one side, jerking his pike as far from her direction as
he could.
"Stop her!" cried the two merchant's guards.
Rockam watched her flash past, before nonchalantly bringing the pike
down to bar their way. "Where you think you two are going in
such a hurry at this time of night, huh?"
"What the fuck?" one of them sputtered. "Catch her!
She just killed Cados Bey!"
Rockam glanced over his shoulder at the fleeing elf. "Who? Ain't
nobody there but shadows. I think you two had better come with me,
yes? Show me what all the fuss is about."
"You fucking asshole! She's getting away!" one of the
guards made to push past his pike, but Rockam simply swung it hard at
the man's throat.
"Are you resisting arrest, mate?" hissed the street guard.
"Please tell me you are. I haven't killed anyone all week."
They went quietly after that.
**
Nysta sat, breathing heavily.
Blood was still dripping down her arms and the wound on her back
hadn't healed properly yet. It hurt. She had bruises in places she
didn't think should have bruises, and her legs felt they were on
fire.
She felt exhausted.
The Bladesmaster had been quick. Damn quick.
His only problem had been his training. Each move was designed with a
countermove in mind, and when she didn't know the countermove, he
couldn't really move. Nysta had always avoided learning any single
style for just that reason. She didn't want anyone being able to
predict her strikes.
"Martial arts?" she'd said to the Mage. "What's
that?"
He stared at her, amused and incredulous. "You mean, you don't
know any?"
She shrugged. "I fight to kill, Mage. I don't fight for fun."
"But martial arts is about all that! Or so I'm told. I've seen
the Bladesmasters fence, and this one's good, Nysta. Really good."
She shrugged. "That game you play. With all the pieces. Black
and white ones."
"Chess?"
"Yes. Chess. If I played chess with you, you'd win, right?"
"Well, probably," he said, lightly, avoiding the chance to
toss another insult in her direction.
She nodded. "You would. Let's face it. You know the rules. You
know the moves. Now, if we played your chess, and I picked up the all
the white pieces and rammed them down your throat before cutting off
your head with the board, would you say that was a win to me?"
The Mage smiled, slightly, nodding to himself as though aware of
something he hadn't seen before. "I would say, Nysta, that I
don't think I'll challenge you to a game of chess, if you don't
mind."
She thought about the fight.
The way the Bladesmaster had moved. All flashy and with flourishes.
The way he struck with style more than intent.
She smirked, remembering the way his eyes had bulged when she buried
The Gate to Hell into his heart.
Clenching her fist, she felt his blood squeezed out between her
fingers.
She thought some more.
A
Flaw in the Glass.
She loved that knife.
It was a good knife.
And that Bladesmaster's dagger? The purple one.
That was a good knife, too.
She chewed her bottom lip.
Nysta
began walking slowly back in the direction of the Bey residence,
gripping The Gate to Hell
in her pale white fist.
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